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:iconmissdarkshiva:
This is my first actaul critique so I hope what I'll say is okay ^^;

The head, and torso are well perportioned but the arms seem alittle short and the swords look alittle too curved to me. I'm don't know too much about samari armor but it looks alittle off to me in the middle section. However I love the style of the drawing, as well as the black and white coloring style, and the shading on this peice is wonderful! Overall this peice of art is very well done and if doing to be on my fav list! Keep up the good work buddy! Hope to see more art from you soon!

MissDarkShiva~
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:icongenesischant:
Thanks a lot! I really appreciate you taking the time to offer real criticism. I know what you mean about some of the proportions. This piece is sort of weirdly stylized, so some of that is intentional, and some is probably not. The swords are probably supposed to curve like that, katana varied widely in the amount of curve in the blade.

Thanks again, I rely on you guys to give me honest feedback, hahaha.

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:iconmissdarkshiva:
I'm glad I was able to help dear ^^

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